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the story is good but  it needs more  deep in the main cast ,but overall is good and where is the continued chapters?
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its a great reading experience_________________--------------_-__-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-__-_-_-_-_-_-_-__-_-_-_-_-_-<<-<-<--_-_-_-__-_-_-_-_-__-_-_-_-_-__-_->:3
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I  like the story and also appreciate the writer for the description which was given in the story there are many parts of the story which I like  the characters design was good and for now I'm waiting for the next update
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an amazing book by an amazing author. keep up the good work! (I miss you,dm me sometime?) keep it up! why are you still here? read this book and share it and give gifts and stones!!!!!!!
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All the people are on their guard as they prepare themselves to battle the emperor again. Then Charles sighed and said:
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"Yeah, this is a dumb case
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REVISE - "The IRV Coelecanth is a 200 foot vessel with a 1900 pound draw, crewed at full capacity with only five, and capable of running indefinitely within a twenty mile radius of recycling target." Satan paused for a second, looking at Mr. Bold. He seemed nigh unreadable. "Now, the true draw of this vessel is it's lack of upkeep. Most ocean going vessels require expensive and heavy fuel to run, however the Coelecanth can run with a full hold of recyclable trash for over ten hours before it requires refueling." Satan pressed a button on his little clicker and a simple schematic of the Coelecanth came up on screen. "Now what makes the Coelecanth so fuel efficient is it's source of fuel. It doesn't run on Gasoline, natural gas, or any other mainstream source. It runs off of the trash itself, using a stabilized plasmatic reaction within the core of the ship to power all of it's systems. When refueling is required, it simply draws in appropriate materials from the cargo hold and inserts them into the reactor, super-heating them into plasma and refreshing the reaction within." Satan paused, looking at Mr. Bold. "There are many more technical details," Satan had to force himself once again. "Nicholas, but that's the basic gist of it. Anything I can help to clarify so far?" Mr. Bold sat forward, leaning over the table on his elbows.
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Maria was no joke when it came to dressing and punctuality. She could insult you in a hundred different ways about your fashion taste and you wouldn't even realise.. She has a stopwatch on hand all the time, if you are even a second late, you will get to face her wrath.
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?"Uno. Dos. Tres. HALA MADRID!"
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"Cala, I brought a guest. Give us your finest dish." Uncle Marcus yelled and led my to a table and placing me on the chair. I still had to sit on my knees to put my arms on the table. It wasn't even a minuet before food was placed in front of me. I looked up and saw an old lady with a kind smile on her face. "Cala, this is Jackalynn. Jackalynn, this is Cala."
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"It didn't seem or feel like anything I know. It was very powerful indeed, but I do not know what it was."

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